Wow, that's a hell of a lot better than mine D: But I think those guys are right, less detail and it's more how you present rather than the content; confidence etc.

Even so, would you guys give me some tips on mine? I figured it would be better to post it in this topic rather than start a whole new ...

Hello guys, just a few things that I could with some help on.
As the title says; I have the fitness tests in 3 weeks.
I've been in training since the start of the application process (about 2 months). However I'm starting to feel quite nervous because I'm not quite ready.
The last time I timed ...